Patterns (quote, Erhu)

Jadix · 03-18-2007, 10:50 AM

Once a man had a fleet
with many thousand men
he landed on a sunny beach
someplace he'd never been

And the people dressed up strange
but their streets were paved in gold
And so a war was waged
but his guns shot down them all

Mistakes rust through the years
the gold has become black
and now the war is here again
with the people still in last

enemyat_thesix · 03-18-2007, 02:03 PM

only Wordsworth can get away with awkward word order. Meter isn't the most important thing.

PaperHurricanesAndPlanes · 03-18-2007, 06:51 PM

Wadsworth?

enemyat_thesix · 03-18-2007, 07:29 PM

@_@

i always do that... GRR.

Jadix · 03-19-2007, 12:05 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by enemyat_thesix

only Wordsworth can get away with awkward word order. Meter isn't the most important thing.

thats wierd, because i dont find it awkward to sing at all.

enemyat_thesix · 03-19-2007, 10:52 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by PaperHurricanesAndPlanes

Wadsworth?

wait a second: I did mean Wordsworth: William Wordsworth, not Henry Wadsworth Longfellow.

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Jadix infamous nimbus Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 140	Patterns Once a man had a fleet with many thousand men he landed on a sunny beach someplace he'd never been And the people dressed up strange but their streets were paved in gold And so a war was waged but his guns shot down them all Mistakes rust through the years the gold has become black and now the war is here again with the people still in last