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Old 04-04-2007, 02:43 AM   #1 (permalink)
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I've posted three new songs up on my myspace.

www.myspace.com/jodileeparker

And one that I put up at christmas and my old guitarist took down, the bastard!

Any opinions on the songwriting and the general arrangement, mixing and use of effects would be great.
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Old 04-04-2007, 06:12 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Listen and respond or die!!!!

If I see no posts here soon Crowquill and Either/Or are the only two who will escape my apocalypic fury. The rivers and lakes will boil, toads will fall from the sky right on top of your head (did I mention they were radioactive, acid-sweating toads?) big pink jelly things will come out of your bathtub a lot like that big pink jelly thing in Ghostbusters II only scarier and angrier and with big pointy teeth that it can shoot out with pinpoint precision and are replaced straight away with another set of ivory bullets. Repeating machine-gun shark blobs! In your house! If you don't listen to my music! And reply!
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Old 04-04-2007, 05:45 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I downloaded it all, and will listen upon my return.
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You misspelled apocalyptic. I no longer fear your wrath.
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Old 04-05-2007, 12:50 PM   #5 (permalink)
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The missing T was my faith in humani-T.

I think that works better when I say it, hmmm.
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(ahem critique other people's songs so we have reason to critique yours Boy-o!) btw- sorry you dudes broke up... I liked vito's lament though!
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DRMO is there anywhere I can listen to your music?
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Old 04-05-2007, 04:19 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Oooh, let me think. Um, it's at... no, nope I've forgotten.
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Old 04-05-2007, 04:35 PM   #9 (permalink)
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(ahem critique other people's songs so we have reason to critique yours Boy-o!) btw- sorry you dudes broke up... I liked vito's lament though!
Thanks. I've only just noticed something on the recording of that one. Listen to the way I pronounce the word 'country'. I think I'll have to stop emphasising the first syllable on that word, it's bordering on profanity :/
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LOL COUNT ry... very niiiice :-D
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