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Old 04-05-2007, 04:29 PM   #1 (permalink)
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I can't say what I want to, words hold no meaning for
I've shot myself in the foot, and everyone else
Is grabbing at their back for relief.
I'm not exactly sure when or how I
Came to be this mindless youth but I'm
On my knees with both hands cupped in front of me.
My eyes drowned long ago from my conscience's waves
And I can't say that I blame it for allowing
That leak to appear.
I shot at the sun and all its fellow stars and it
was so much more than a foolish thing to do.
I guess that's what it takes if you want to be alone,
Just stab at everyone around you but
I sure do miss that feeling of company.
So I'll wait, I'll wait for all the back wounds to heal
If that's what it takes though I
Sure do hate to feel alone but 'Sorry' just can't be enough.

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Old 04-05-2007, 06:38 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I'm not exactly sure when or how I
Same to be this mindless youth but I'm
Did you mean "seem"?

to fo.
to do

Hey man. Just go ahead and clean it up a little. Make a second run through, see if you like everything... and then give it an edit. I feel like you might have rushed through this.
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Old 04-07-2007, 01:31 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I'm not exactly sure when or how I
Same to be this mindless youth but I'm
Did you mean "seem"?

to fo.
to do

Hey man. Just go ahead and clean it up a little. Make a second run through, see if you like everything... and then give it an edit. I feel like you might have rushed through this.
Lmao, yeah, I definitely rushed thorugh with the typing. I'll clean it up now.
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