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ok so a few months ago i got real angry at something. and i wrote this little song and im quite proud of it, if i do say so myself. anyone else's opinions?
We sit and think, As we wipe dry. All the tears that we cry. I'm on the brink, The edge of insanity. Wondering what do I see in this vanity? I lay here burning in my mentality Cut, stab Watch them bleed. You'll not suffer For this sinful deed. Put them through their sorrows For they would grieve in the end Take the broken from the heart Try to find a way to mend. You end the pain, Break the streak As they become bleak. In their vein, The cold, it begins to pulse. You watch as they convulse. It finally hits, the true reality. Cut, stab Watch them bleed. You'll not suffer For this sinful deed. Put them through their sorrows For they would grieve in the end Take the broken from the heart Try to find a way to mend. They're finally dead, They're bleeding the red. Enough was said. As you're tears were shed. thanks gitrshredr |
I have an idea, it begins with s and ends in uicide.
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really depressing, wish i hadnt read that
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I agree, i'm kinda down now. /cuts self
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"As you're tears were shed."
*your Kinda weak. Feels cliched. |
I could paraphrase that...
"OH EM GEE SOMEONE TOOK MY PARKING PLACE!" *runs out in a dramatic frenzy* "THE HORROR!" *stabs self!* *peeps to see if anyone is looking >.>* |
Kinda weak < That's charitable. Here's a word that starts with s and ends in ucks. Have an original thought. Then come back. My friend, "The a--hole" informs me that was an a--hole thing to say. I'm just going to say "I couldn't care less."
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Why do people always write songs when they are angry.
Can't you just down a load of mescaline & write about that instead? |
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