Voice_of_the_Soul12,13,01

Verse 1:

Apathetic vermin
No urge to make a difference
Living dead decaying human
Crawling through a petty existence

One chance for redemption
Your inner darkness
Need for your revolution
You'll have my forgiveness

Chorus:

I'm your salvation
From your stagnation
Embrace your hatred
Loathe me or live in death

I'll be your martyr
I'll feed your anger
All I need is your lives
Your dark side gives me power

Bridge:

Hate me
Empower me
Loathe me
Strengthen me

Verse 2:

Assemble your brotherhood
Those who share your interest
Plot your attack you should
You live because it is me you detest

Your past life was worse than death
Out of the coffin your hate did for you
Rally your troops and strike me down
Your lust for my blood exists, it's true that...

Chorus:

I'm your salvation
From your stagnation
Embrace your hatred
Loathe me or live in death

I'll be your martyr
I'll feed your anger
All I need is your lives
Your dark side gives me power

Interlude:

I butchered your serenity
Denied the Sodomites matrimony
Chained the Negros to a life of slavery
Gave the Hebrews power and authority

Conquered and slaughtered the Indians
Stole the land from the Mexicans
Occupied and saved the Arabians
Hesitant to stop the Koreans

(Guitar Solo)

Breakdown;

Give me immortality
Make me your deity
I create tragedy
Live by hating me

Chorus:

I'm your salvation
From your stagnation
Embrace your hatred
Loathe me or live in death

I'll be your martyr
I'll feed your anger
All I need is your lives
Your dark side gives me power

Outro;

(Hate me!) Your dark side gives me power!
(Empower me!) Your dark side gives me power!
(Loathe me!) Your dark side gives me power!
(Strengthen me!) Your dark side gives me power!

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Ace

I think you try to write death metalish way too much.
Write in your own style.

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Quote:

Originally Posted by RezZ I think I know much better than you ever will how Mettalica is. I used to play for 2 years in a Mettalica cover band.

Voice_of_the_Soul12,13,01

You thought this was death metalish? Thanks, I guess. I found it to be a little nu-metalish.