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Old 04-25-2007, 10:04 PM   #1 (permalink)
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This one has a bit of a grungy feel to it.
Not sure if I'm going to modify the ending or not.
I suppose we can have a vote on it.



Rotation
04/24/07 - 04/25/07

[-----Verse 1-----]

Winter skies have fallen
On a sunny summer day

Clouds have formed
Across the sky
To keep the light away

The future's looking dim
But it's better than the past

The present's in
My own two hands
But I can't make it last

[-----End Verse-----]

[-----Chorus-----]

Around and 'round
Spin me like a top
Keep me in rotation
So I'll never want to stop

Feed me from your hand
So I can live again
Let me feel just like I felt
When you were still my friend

I can't believe you left, me
I don't know where you've been

You need to be here with, me
But I'm alone instead

[-----End Chorus-----]

[-----Verse 2-----]

Freshly picked flowers
In a water filled vase

Sitting in
The window sill
Withering away

When everything is said
And everything is done

I'll still be here
Waiting for
A taste of things to come

[-----End Verse-----]

[-----Chorus-----]

Around and 'round
Spin me like a top
Keep me in rotation
So I'll never want to stop

Feed me from your hand
So I can live again
Let me feel just like I felt
When you were still my friend

I can't believe you left, me
I don't know where you've been

You need to be here with, me
But I'm alone instead

Ohhh...

I can't believe you left, me
I don't know where you've been

You need to be here with, me
But I'm alone instead

(yelled)

Keep me in rotation (x4)

[-----End Chorus-----]
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Old 04-25-2007, 10:07 PM   #2 (permalink)
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i really like the first verse. good stuff man. and with the right guitar and drums, the ending would sound real good. xD
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Old 04-25-2007, 10:32 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Thank you.
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