Fix (metal, rock, cover, solo, band)

Voice_of_the_Soul12,13,01 · 04-22-2007, 11:13 PM

Verse 1:

Innocent, sweet, pure female
In modest cloth, proper attire
Weak, frail, ripe, ready
Satisfaction guaranteed

Uncontrollable carnal urge
Erectile desire to be inside her
No regard for her body or soul
Another shot to keep my high

Chorus:

I need my fix
My addiction to agony
A yearning for release
An orgasm through cruelty

Verse 2:

I slashed through the fabric so thin
I revealed the forbidden orbs of sin
Quivered and whimpered, a waste of time
My desire for brutality such a crime?

Pinned to the ground, my fix was due
The inevitable breach, erect with glee
I thrust through the forest, broke the purity
Crimson and seed flowing like the Nile

Chorus:

I need my fix
My addiction to agony
A yearning for release
An orgasm through cruelty

Interlude:

Her gates defiled and ruined
The milky surface slashed and wounded
My seed has been sewn for the day
I'll be eager to return to reap my rewards

No satisfaction felt, my fix dead
Need more power, another hit of maim
Grabbing the once shimmering strands on her head
I stifle the noise as I feast on the pain

(guitar solo)

Outro:

Flat on the ground, covered in lust
Red flowing out, flesh cold as a rock
I live for the sin, suffering just
Feed on the thrill, terror, and shock

Buried, preserved for another day
Innocent no more, dormant in hell
To be continued, my lifeless precious
Until next time I need my fix

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IrishWhiskey · 04-23-2007, 04:35 PM

not gonna lie, thats kind of creepy bro...

Voice_of_the_Soul12,13,01 · 04-23-2007, 07:38 PM

I was trying something different. To be honest, most of my songs are Star Wars themed songs since I'm in a Star Wars metal band (laugh), but lately, I've been trying to expand my horizons. This would be one of those expansions.

You should have read it before. This is the second draft. First one was all blunt and full of cliche gore. I'm trying to die it down on the upfront imagery and make it suitable for a slow, melancholy, yet morbid sounding song. It was to be a typical grindcore song, but I thought...."no."

Besides, if you watch SVU and "Hellraiser" as much as I do, what would you expect? HAHA.

PaperHurricanesAndPlanes · 04-24-2007, 08:49 AM

Wow. I'm gonna go and weep now. SVU <3, though.

Voice_of_the_Soul12,13,01 · 05-13-2007, 02:57 PM

I've added some revisions to it, as well as a MIDI of the music I wrote for it. I was going to have it be some fast short death metal song, but I wanted to try something I haven't before.

Tell me if you have trouble downloading it. It's in the first post.

04-22-2007, 11:13 PM	#1 (permalink)
Voice_of_the_Soul12,13,01 #1 Schuldinist. Join Date: Apr 2007 Posts: 420	Fix Verse 1: Innocent, sweet, pure female In modest cloth, proper attire Weak, frail, ripe, ready Satisfaction guaranteed Uncontrollable carnal urge Erectile desire to be inside her No regard for her body or soul Another shot to keep my high Chorus: I need my fix My addiction to agony A yearning for release An orgasm through cruelty Verse 2: I slashed through the fabric so thin I revealed the forbidden orbs of sin Quivered and whimpered, a waste of time My desire for brutality such a crime? Pinned to the ground, my fix was due The inevitable breach, erect with glee I thrust through the forest, broke the purity Crimson and seed flowing like the Nile Chorus: I need my fix My addiction to agony A yearning for release An orgasm through cruelty Interlude: Her gates defiled and ruined The milky surface slashed and wounded My seed has been sewn for the day I'll be eager to return to reap my rewards No satisfaction felt, my fix dead Need more power, another hit of maim Grabbing the once shimmering strands on her head I stifle the noise as I feast on the pain (guitar solo) Outro: Flat on the ground, covered in lust Red flowing out, flesh cold as a rock I live for the sin, suffering just Feed on the thrill, terror, and shock Buried, preserved for another day Innocent no more, dormant in hell To be continued, my lifeless precious Until next time I need my fix Start Player Last edited by Voice_of_the_Soul12,13,01; 05-22-2007 at 07:44 PM.

05-13-2007, 02:57 PM	#5 (permalink)
Voice_of_the_Soul12,13,01 #1 Schuldinist. Join Date: Apr 2007 Posts: 420	I've added some revisions to it, as well as a MIDI of the music I wrote for it. I was going to have it be some fast short death metal song, but I wanted to try something I haven't before. Tell me if you have trouble downloading it. It's in the first post. __________________ I don't mean to dwell But I can't help myself When I feel the vibe And taste a memory Of a time in life When years seemed to stand still

04-23-2007, 04:35 PM	#2 (permalink)
IrishWhiskey Music Addict Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: new jersey Posts: 48	not gonna lie, thats kind of creepy bro...

04-23-2007, 07:38 PM	#3 (permalink)
Voice_of_the_Soul12,13,01 #1 Schuldinist. Join Date: Apr 2007 Posts: 420	I was trying something different. To be honest, most of my songs are Star Wars themed songs since I'm in a Star Wars metal band (laugh), but lately, I've been trying to expand my horizons. This would be one of those expansions. You should have read it before. This is the second draft. First one was all blunt and full of cliche gore. I'm trying to die it down on the upfront imagery and make it suitable for a slow, melancholy, yet morbid sounding song. It was to be a typical grindcore song, but I thought...."no." Besides, if you watch SVU and "Hellraiser" as much as I do, what would you expect? HAHA.