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TrampInaTux 05-20-2007 06:03 PM

Please read this one and comment. For me. S'Personal. :)
 
That missing part, I thought, was gone forever
consequence, my just revenge, and I was lost forever
Last night I called you, smiled into the night,
and now we're bound together
your body as my coat, you change my weather

A storm followed us, the waves wouldn't part
whiskey in my coffee, the lonely strum of a guitar
things were better, when we loved each other,
a cloud of shame follows the facts,
but tears corner us under covers

Blankets, the green grass of your parents' home
now I feel nothing for the stars, lying alone
the sweet melody of your voice,
follows the footsteps on my path,
consequence, my just revenge, and now I'm lost forever.

sleepy jack 05-20-2007 06:42 PM

Its pretty, I don't have much else to say though.

Patient Dreams 05-29-2007 11:34 AM

Can't find a tempo. Sounds kinda sad though


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