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Old 05-20-2007, 07:03 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Default Please read this one and comment. For me. S'Personal. :)

That missing part, I thought, was gone forever
consequence, my just revenge, and I was lost forever
Last night I called you, smiled into the night,
and now we're bound together
your body as my coat, you change my weather

A storm followed us, the waves wouldn't part
whiskey in my coffee, the lonely strum of a guitar
things were better, when we loved each other,
a cloud of shame follows the facts,
but tears corner us under covers

Blankets, the green grass of your parents' home
now I feel nothing for the stars, lying alone
the sweet melody of your voice,
follows the footsteps on my path,
consequence, my just revenge, and now I'm lost forever.
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Old 05-20-2007, 07:42 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Its pretty, I don't have much else to say though.
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Old 05-29-2007, 12:34 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Can't find a tempo. Sounds kinda sad though
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