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Old 07-07-2007, 01:48 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Default song i guess...

Why’d you have to leave?
Why’d you leave me here alone,
I can’t imagine it getting any worse,
Steal that fiver from your purse.

Stop the world,
I’m getting off,
It’s getting harder,
Everyday,
So get some drugs,
And go our seperate ways.

You want a cigarette?
(Want a cigarette),
You want some crack,
(Want to crack a joke?)
Just tell me what you’re gunna do,
(When they come to kill you),
Just get off the ****ing world.

The creak of a rusty door,
The man is dead on the floor,
It’s getting hard to breathe,
In this room.

Stop the world,
I’m getting off,
Its getting harder,
Everyday,
So get some drink,
And drown your worries away.

You want a cigarette?
(Want a cigarette),
You want some crack,
(Want to crack a joke?)
Just tell me what you’re gunna do,
(When they come to kill you),
Just get off the ****ing world.

You’re sitting here beside me,
As I sing,
I sing about our lives,
and the mysteries that behold us.

Stop the world,
I’m getting off,
It’s getting harder,
Everyday,
So go get a cigarette,
And party away.

You want a cigarette?
(Want a cigarette),
You want some crack,
(Want to crack a joke?)
Just tell me what you’re gunna do,
(When they come to kill you),
Just get off the ****ing world.

Stop the world,
I’m getting off,
It’s getting harder,
Everyday,
So have a bit weed,
And smoke away.

You want a cigarette?
(Want a cigarette),
You want some crack,
(Want to crack a joke?)
Just tell me what you’re gunna do,
(When they come to kill you),
Just get off the ****ing world.
You want a cigarette?
(Want a cigarette),
You want some crack,
(Want to crack a joke?)
Just tell me what you’re gunna do,
(When they come to kill you),
Just get off the ****ing world.

Feedback appreciated will be putting up a Guitar Pro download so you can actually get the beat for the song it looks weird to me otherwise.

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Old 07-07-2007, 02:51 AM   #2 (permalink)
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I've seen worse. Not great but atleast you have some kind of structure.
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