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Old 07-14-2007, 10:37 AM   #1 (permalink)
Join Date: Apr 2007
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Default 1st time writing a song

observe, the velvet sky.
what do you see?
shards of glass.
shining. on off.
christmas lights.

great fortune tellers.
people base their lives on them.
horoscopes. zodiacs.
their movements,
tell us what to do tomorrow.
like pulling all the strings.

expert navigators.
have sketched their routes on the velvet sea.
its never-ending.
you do not move in circles,
and you do not even question why you still follow them.
just better
to go on your own,
and draw your great line to success.

a fallen constellation, yes.
weeping crocodile tears.
a laughter, which you could not hear.
a smile, which you could not see.

stars are just only great painters,
who have sketched ursa major,
in a purple canvas.
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