Twist Of Fate (draft) (Hang)

Ace · 08-02-2007, 12:22 AM

Just now finished this, and I pretty much think of it as a draft.
Ironically, I probably wont make many changes, if any.
Give me some criticism.
(Good will be appreciated, but bad will be ignored. ^_^)

Twist Of Fate
08/01/07 - 08/02/07

[-----Verse 1-----]

Be my blessing
Not my curse
My little angel
I fear the worst
Is yet to come
But I'll save that sorrow, for another day

It's been a while now
And I can't think
My mind's been overrun
And damaged by mistakes

Accidental - or otherwise
The things I dream about
Seem to take over my life

I hope I wake up - to a better day
One without a path, blocked by enemies

[-----End Verse-----]

[-----Chorus-----]

And I will fight my way, through the gates
And I will overcome, everything you throw at me
You don't have to stay by my side
Cause the rest of my life, will be determined by
A final twist of fate

A final turn of the blade

[-----End Chorus-----]

[-----Verse 2-----]

My bittter blessing
My precious curse
Be my angel
Cause I fear the worst
Come sit beside me
My dearest friend
And tell me what you've done
And where you've been

[-----End Verse-----]

[-----Chorus-----]

And I will fight my way, through the gates
And I will overcome, everything you throw at me
You don't have to stay by my side
Cause the rest of my life, will be determined by
A final twist of fate

A final turn of the blade

[-----End Chorus-----]

[-----Verse 3-----]

I thought of leaving
But I wont
Bitter indifference, has always been my home

And looking back - I've always said
Don't think about moving foward, with the past stuck in your head

[-----End Verse-----]

[-----Chorus-----]

And I will fight my way, through the gates
And I will overcome, everything you throw at me
You don't have to stay by my side
Cause the rest of my life, will be determined by
A final twist of fate

A final turn of the blade
A final twist of fate
A final turn of the blade
A final twist of fate

[-----End Chorus-----]