my first post ever? (lyrics, song, Hang) - Music Banter Music Banter

Go Back   Music Banter > Artists Corner > Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
Register Blogging Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read
Welcome to Music Banter Forum! Make sure to register - it's free and very quick! You have to register before you can post and participate in our discussions with over 70,000 other registered members. After you create your free account, you will be able to customize many options, you will have the full access to over 1,100,000 posts.

Thread Tools Display Modes
Old 11-07-2007, 06:52 AM   #1 (permalink)
Join Date: Nov 2007
Location: the bible belt = (
Posts: 8
Default my first post ever?

Well, this is the first forum I've ever posted, so here goes: This is a song I only have a chorus to. Seems to be happening a lot lately. = /

Don't you forget it; it was your fault.
Don't you regret it tomorrow...

I wasn't saying that we need to change,
I was just trying to being lenient
But when you say, I'm the one who doesn't try at anything
I'd like to see, you at least attempt a small apology
But it's all over now, it's all over now
Did it matter anyhow?

-And now that I read this again, you really need music to judge how good lyrics are. It sounds more intense when I sing it.
redINFLUE_TheFineRedLine is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 11-07-2007, 07:13 AM   #2 (permalink)
Join Date: Dec 2005
Posts: 1,671

Happens, by and by i thought it was quite good,
littleknowitall is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 12-10-2010, 04:48 PM   #3 (permalink)
Al Dente
SATCHMO's Avatar
Join Date: Mar 2005
Location: Texas
Posts: 4,708

Originally Posted by Hemequeellult View Post
здравствуйте, давно искала такой форум. всем спасибки, отдельное спасибо админам)
Totally agree.
SATCHMO is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 12-13-2010, 05:35 PM   #4 (permalink)
Music Addict
s_k's Avatar
Join Date: Nov 2010
Location: The Netherlands
Posts: 2,206

We can't read that man...
Click here to see my collection
s_k is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 12-21-2010, 11:11 PM   #5 (permalink)
Join Date: Oct 2010
Location: Dallas, TX
Posts: 17

i agree. words arranged like this would have to be heard sung. hard to picture them making song sense, reads more like poetry.
Chaplin is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 12-22-2010, 08:26 PM   #6 (permalink)
BananaPhish's Avatar
Join Date: Oct 2010
Location: Pennsylvania
Posts: 46

Pretty good...needs to be fleshed out now into a real piece. Well done.
BananaPhish is offline   Reply With Quote

Thread Tools
Display Modes

Similar Threads

© 2003-2024 Advameg, Inc.