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Old 11-14-2007, 08:47 PM   #1 (permalink)
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so i guess i suck at songwriting....just another thing to chock up on my list of failed things

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Old 11-16-2007, 04:19 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Other than your lack of basic knowledge of the English language, the song is bland. It never really goes anywhere, just repeats the same verse over and over about how "we're being cheated" or "we're being used". It sounds like every political punk song I've ever heard.
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