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TheCaster 11-23-2007 07:14 PM

First Shot at Lyrics...
 
yeah i was bored one day and was listenin to some pink floyd n' drinkin some green tea... tell me what'cha think

What has it come to?
You don't know where you are.
Look what its done to you
Your bent all into pieces.

Do you think you really love him?
cause all he does is hate.
Are you sure he only wants to kiss?
or get in between the sheets

Why do you follow
Everything that is asked of you?
Do you want to be accepted?
If no one ever cares.

Is life worth living?
when your doing what your told
Is this your life?
or someone elses?

Have you figured it out yet
Cause All you gotta do is
Look inbetween the lines

Not completely my first shot at lyrics.. just the only one i kind of liked haha

under 11-24-2007 12:30 AM

i can see how a sense of pink floyd would fit into this.

but there are some things that you emphasize that dont need emphasis.

for example:

Have you figured it out yet
Cause All you gotta do is
Look inbetween the lines

--
there are words you dont emphasise that need emphasis

Do you think you really love him?
cause all he does is hate.
Are you sure he only wants to kiss?
or get in between the sheets

its really good though.

TheCaster 11-24-2007 07:22 AM

hmm i see... thank ya

Brock_West 11-24-2007 11:12 PM

yeah it's really good

TheCaster 11-25-2007 08:11 PM

why thank you


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