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Old 12-15-2007, 04:32 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Default Mutilated Society

Mutilated Society

Verse One
Now itís time to make all of ya realize
We are the sickness to finalize your demise
What are you gonna do when your lies rely
On that flesh disguise that you call life
Now it's time to bite the dust
Stricken to hell by the god you trust
Just remember how you ****ed UP!!!!
MUTILATED BY THIS ANARCHY
CONFINED BY THE MARQUEE
OF THE PLAGUE THAT YOU BREATHE
LIBERATE DEMOCRACY
THE TIME FOR MERCY CEASES TO EXIST!!!


Chorus
THIS IS A TOMB FOR THE DEAD
THOSE WHO HAVE BEEN VICTIMS OF THE PLAGUE
THIS IS A MUTLIATED SOCIETY!!!
THIS IS A TOMB FOR THE DEAD
THOSE WHO HAVE BEEN VICTIMS OF THE PLAGUE
THIS IS A MUTILATED SOCIETY!!!


Verse Two
Thatís enough with this masquerade
Your constant complaining is making me irate
Stupid mother****er, keep falling for my bait
It wonít be long until you get graved
This is a game of pain and precision
The hate has viciously risen
Lips are bitten, the blood spills
Time to get full of CHILLS!!!
RESISTANCE IS FUTILE
JUDGE, JURY AND EXECUTIONER, WALK THE GREEN MILE
THE SKIN PEELING IS GETTING VILE
CANíT YOU ****ING SEE?
THIS IS THE RISE OF A MAGGOT SOCIETY!!!


Chorus
THIS IS A TOMB FOR THE DEAD
THOSE WHO HAVE BEEN VICTIMS OF THE PLAGUE
THIS IS A MUTLIATED SOCIETY!!!
THIS IS A TOMB FOR THE DEAD
THOSE WHO HAVE BEEN VICTIMS OF THE PLAGUE
THIS IS A MUTILATED SOCIETY!!!


Harmonic Outro
All I wanted was something to feel
This is nowhere close to real
I canít make it real
So Iíll just wait and eventually bleed..

All I wanted was something to feel
This is nowhere close to real
I canít make it real
So Iíll just wait and eventually bleed..
TONIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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Old 12-16-2007, 08:11 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Well I can feel you on one thing in here, your constant complaining is making me irate.
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Old 12-16-2007, 09:42 PM   #3 (permalink)
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If I were pro-angsty metal lyrics, I'd say this isn't half bad. I reccommend keeping the style, losing some angst, and staying away from using ideas Corey Taylor throws into most of his songs. It is obvious you are heavily influenced by SlipKnot.
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Old 12-17-2007, 11:59 AM   #4 (permalink)
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i agree, if i was into the hard metal/ kinda emo stuff i think it would be a good lyric.. it just seems like your bitching instead of singing...
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Old 12-19-2007, 08:30 PM   #5 (permalink)
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That's amazing, keep posting more.
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Old 12-19-2007, 08:36 PM   #6 (permalink)
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i got a laugh today
from reading this
it sounds like slipknot, had sex with a retard.
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