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Old 12-17-2007, 12:13 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Default The Death of The Thief

Trying new things, tell me what you think.




Fuck-
That’s what it must have been:
Luck

Seen
Not heard- I was but a shadow- merely discerned.
How keen

For the host to peek through the blinds; concerned
At exactly the right time
What hatred to the world had he learned?

But of course I was the pantomime.
For the entire span of my life:
I’ve been the filth no one’s taken seriously; the grime.

Why the hell would he not grab his knife?
And force this sad realization of mimicry out of my head?
Beware: there’s a killer- To Fife, to Fife!

I was a notable man in my stead.
I will- would have- assured you of that, noble guard.
I am lying down now, burdened with your lead.

It’s hard-
To imagine what isn’t come into being
For reality is no bard

And regardless of seeing
Sweet poetry, life supports no true justice- for
The scales are always tipped in this world – and now, here for my being.

Poor
Is my cruel heart, so I will dare cry out: “Wherefore art thou?”
But no response, and my utterance dies; it does not soar.

Does timeliness allow?
Balance and order- no- morality is surely a fool’s game.
But still, how? Somehow-

This is negligible.
I’m dying of a shotgun wound in this biting December snow
Because I couldn’t live to see my children eating ketchup packets five nights in a row-

Sad, and ironic-
“Fuck you, Jesus.”



-Jake V.
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Old 12-17-2007, 12:17 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Old 12-17-2007, 12:20 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Haha you like that pg. 99 quote?
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Old 12-17-2007, 07:49 AM   #4 (permalink)
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this is really good.. id love to see how your going to fit it into a song. if you ever make a recording please post it :P
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Old 12-18-2007, 12:55 AM   #5 (permalink)
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FUCK YOU JESUUUUS!
Was there any need for spamming the thread like that?
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Was there any need for spamming the thread like that?
yeah, there was. obviously you don't get the reference, so piss off.

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Haha you like that pg. 99 quote?
yeah, haha.
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