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Old 12-23-2007, 01:07 AM   #1 (permalink)
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(verse)
We are smart.
Relatively
We are weak.
so we invent things

(bridge)
But we are blind
and running out of time

We want love.
We'll kill for profit.
Know of peace.
somehow we've lost it.

Cuz we are blind
and about to find

(chorus)
nobody will care

We have problems
More than the landfills
We have plans
That we cant handle

'Cause when you're blind
Some things are hard to hide

nobody will care

Welcome to Earth!
Beautiful child.
It'll be alright
but may be awhile

Cuz we are blind
And its hard to find

somebody to care

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Old 12-23-2007, 01:24 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Cuz we are blind
And I'm out of rhymes

I do sense a touch of honesty here.
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Old 12-23-2007, 01:14 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Old 12-26-2007, 01:32 AM   #4 (permalink)
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i can see this in a new Hollywood Undead album. i mean if you added some like rap/rock vintage to it. it'd be an amazing set of lyrics to use. good job.
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Old 12-31-2007, 12:10 AM   #5 (permalink)
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hey thanks
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Old 01-04-2008, 12:48 AM   #6 (permalink)
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I really like the lyrics, except for
"And I'm out of rhymes"
I just don't like when lyrics refer to the fact that it's a song, know what I mean? Just my opinion.

I really like the statement it's making about the human race.
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Old 01-05-2008, 12:47 AM   #7 (permalink)
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I really like the lyrics, except for
"And I'm out of rhymes"
I just don't like when lyrics refer to the fact that it's a song, know what I mean? Just my opinion.

I really like the statement it's making about the human race.
that was kind of a place holder

what do you think now?
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Old 01-05-2008, 01:02 AM   #8 (permalink)
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Better!
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Old 01-05-2008, 02:30 AM   #9 (permalink)
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short crappy version: nobody cares.mp3

my voice sucks haha
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