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Jadix 12-24-2007 01:50 AM

failing at life is fun
 
I am so sick
of everyone
living there lives
like its worthless

They sit around
happy as clowns
leaving their dreams
without vessel

it seems to me
to be more fun
failing at life
than just watching

PaperHurricanesAndPlanes 12-24-2007 08:07 AM

The first two verses are about, it seems people failing life, and you criticize them, then say failing at life looks fun. What?

Jadix 12-24-2007 12:39 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by PaperHurricanesAndPlanes (Post 424706)
The first two verses are about, it seems people failing life, and you criticize them, then say failing at life looks fun. What?

the first two verses aren't people failing at life. its them taking the easy way out instead of going for their dreams. They sit around and watch tv and go to their job that they have just for the money so they can pay the bills and do it again next month.

i then say its more fun to fail at life, than just to watch it go by without trying to do what you want.

Dr_Rez 12-24-2007 01:04 PM

Good idea for song, just need to up the anti on the lyrics a bit.

PaperHurricanesAndPlanes 12-24-2007 03:17 PM

It's spelled ante.

Dr_Rez 12-24-2007 03:51 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by PaperHurricanesAndPlanes (Post 424791)
It's spelled ante.

...ok

thanks...i guess

PaperHurricanesAndPlanes 12-24-2007 04:01 PM

I'm just here to help :-P.

CAPTAIN CAVEMAN 12-24-2007 05:16 PM

is it more fun failing at life, or at writing, in your opinion?

PaperHurricanesAndPlanes 12-24-2007 11:12 PM

Hey now, play nice with the /\/00b.

Jadix 12-24-2007 11:27 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by The-Starving-Artless (Post 424829)
is it more fun failing at life, or at writing, in your opinion?

ooooooh you made a funny. congrats :thumb:

Jadix 12-24-2007 11:29 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by PaperHurricanesAndPlanes (Post 424943)
Hey now, play nice with the /\/00b.

what? I dont understand. the last word is just a bunch of symbols. I mean i understood it, but then you're using all these slashes and i just dont get it! play nice with the WHAT!!?

Dr_Rez 12-25-2007 09:13 AM

Paper has now proven his point. ^

Jadix 12-25-2007 10:04 AM

pfff

under 12-25-2007 10:27 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Jadix (Post 424947)
what? I dont understand. the last word is just a bunch of symbols. I mean i understood it, but then you're using all these slashes and i just dont get it! play nice with the WHAT!!?

Quote:

Originally Posted by Jadix (Post 424975)
pfff

/\/00b. = noob.



































































































noob

Jadix 12-31-2007 12:11 AM

whats a noob?

Music Resource 01-04-2008 07:04 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Jadix (Post 424681)
I am so sick
of everyone
living there lives
like its worthless

They sit around
happy as clowns
leaving their dreams
without vessel

it seems to me
to be more fun
failing at life
than just watching

Hi Jadix,

That's how I view most people too. Most don't seem to have much of a plan and they don't seem to realize the importance of a plan. They are blissfully ignorant in general. It bothers me. I can understand this in younger folks but when I see it in adults, I'm always baffled.

Perceptive lyrics. Nice job.


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