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Old 12-24-2007, 01:50 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Default failing at life is fun

I am so sick
of everyone
living there lives
like its worthless

They sit around
happy as clowns
leaving their dreams
without vessel

it seems to me
to be more fun
failing at life
than just watching

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Old 12-24-2007, 08:07 AM   #2 (permalink)
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The first two verses are about, it seems people failing life, and you criticize them, then say failing at life looks fun. What?
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Old 12-24-2007, 12:39 PM   #3 (permalink)
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The first two verses are about, it seems people failing life, and you criticize them, then say failing at life looks fun. What?
the first two verses aren't people failing at life. its them taking the easy way out instead of going for their dreams. They sit around and watch tv and go to their job that they have just for the money so they can pay the bills and do it again next month.

i then say its more fun to fail at life, than just to watch it go by without trying to do what you want.
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Old 12-24-2007, 01:04 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Good idea for song, just need to up the anti on the lyrics a bit.
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Old 12-24-2007, 03:17 PM   #5 (permalink)
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It's spelled ante.
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It's spelled ante.
...ok

thanks...i guess
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I'm just here to help :-P.
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is it more fun failing at life, or at writing, in your opinion?
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Old 12-24-2007, 11:12 PM   #9 (permalink)
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Hey now, play nice with the /\/00b.
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Old 12-24-2007, 11:27 PM   #10 (permalink)
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is it more fun failing at life, or at writing, in your opinion?
ooooooh you made a funny. congrats
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