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Old 01-05-2008, 09:07 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Default Will You Go?

Will You Go?

Please give me some feedback on this song of mine, or let me know if you like it!


It seems as if you're tired
Of the place where you reside
It would take a split second
To flip the switch, redraw the map,
Change the way you get by.

If you go there
You'll return the ocean.
You'll return the evening.
You'll be returning everything you ever knew.

But, oh, to go there
You'd return to spring time.
You'd return to twilight.
You'd return to everything you ever knew.

Now you're faced with a decision.
You've got to make up your mind.
Do you go there?
Pondering all these questions,
Try to keep open
And don't be scared

To go there.
Walk across the cobwebs.
Hear the ancients singing.
Wonder if you'll ever be the same again.

You listen.
Listen for the answers.
Embark upon a journey
Hoping that you'll never be the same again.

Will you go? (as nauseam)

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