On the Right Track
 

On the right track
cause brains is what he lack
on the right track
cause he his such a hack

I'm everywhere
going to run this place to hell
right track is a douche
oh well oh well

Too many rhymes in the first bit...bad.
Hell and well...tut tut

2/10

I wonder if that poem is about you right track. I mean thats your name and you are a douche

I'm flattered. :D

Sugar kiss
Its face looks like a jar of piss
Why rhymes with piss and kiss?
Oh how about this
The jizz coming from your father
Last night in joy when he made you scream and holler

I could see this only working if you kind of did it like circa Survive vibe and filled it in with some awesome solos and more lyrics what you have could be the chores . Keep working on it champ.

it sounds like a 6 year old wroteit..

maybe a smart 6 year old:)

I got lullable visual images from this thread title.