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Old 01-15-2008, 09:07 AM   #1 (permalink)
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do you really want to come here
it's crazy, crazy
i see it in you now
the doubt
you say you want to know me
oh you're so intrigued
ive pulled a knife on someone like you before
yeah, made em wanna leave

ill undress for you
just to please you
to make you see me
they way you want to
ill dance for you and pose for you

just look out your window
even if no one's home
to me, you're looking out your window
looking back at me
seeing what you want
not what I want to give

im undressing for you
only to please you
to make you see me
just the way you want to

love me the way you love your mother
but youll treat me the way you hate your father
undress me the way you would your lover
but youll see me the way you see every other woman that ever put your hands on her

so get on your way now
leave it all behind
i never pulled a knife on you
but i ****ed up my mind

now, ill undress for him
maybe itll please him
maybe hell see me
the way you never did
the way you never cared

maybe hell leave me
maybe ill leave him
with a knife down his throat
like i shouldve done to you

yes, i shouldve done that to you
i shouldve done it to you,..........
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Old 01-27-2008, 01:39 PM   #2 (permalink)
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that bad? really?
no suggestions?
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i changed my mind; i changed my mind;now i'm feeling different

all that time, wasted
i wish i was a little more delicate
i wish my
i wish my
i wish my
i wish my
i wish my name was clementine - sarah jaffe
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Old 01-28-2008, 02:24 AM   #3 (permalink)
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I'll critique this tomorrow when I'm in a more critiquing mood. I'm posting this to remind myself, if I still forget bug me until I do.
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Old 01-28-2008, 01:47 PM   #4 (permalink)
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it's like a natural aphrodisiac
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