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Old 08-17-2005, 03:22 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Red face August came -- dedicated to boo -- plz tell me what u think

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Old 08-22-2005, 08:36 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Pretty good stuff in my opinion. Did you write any music for it? What style of music would it go with? The lyrics seem to flow pretty well except for the last chunk (verse?). Overall, not shabby in the least.
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Old 02-08-2008, 06:53 PM   #3 (permalink)
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hey the ascent you ever played ireland man. was in ohio last year playing golf tournament loved the place. you got any samples you could send or can i download off your site?
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