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saraheleven11 02-12-2008 12:44 AM

da da song
 
i would like to see what people think about this song my friend wrote it ad she doesnt believe me when i tell her its pretty good. so i told her i would prove it to her.



I understand how you feel
I understand your point of view
I understand why you made your decision.

CHORUS:
I've listened to your reasons
I've heard the words you spoke
And now i've made my decision
That its time for me to go
I need to pave my own road
I gotta make my own mistakes
You've gotta let me go
It's time to let me go


I want you to know
You have my love and respect
I hope you know i'll always miss you
And that i dont wanna hurt you
But i gotta do whats right for me

Repeat chorus

I know you dont want to
but im begging you please
I need to live my own life
I want to make my own choices
I need you to understand

repeat chorus

Its time to let me go
just let me go

right-track 02-12-2008 04:51 AM

I've moved it here for others to critique.
Tell 'your friend' she is welcome to post her songs here in this forum.

GKB116 02-12-2008 07:46 PM

It's okay...it's lacking a little expansive use of the language but it wasn't bad,


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