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Old 02-16-2008, 04:06 AM   #1 (permalink)
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The starry dreams we had
Blew away, in this valentine.
And our reality
Stung sweeter than we'd dreamt.
Take away, all this romance,
And baby I'll be gone.
Take away what I feel for you,
Its like I'd never been born.

This night may never end
But I’d send away the sunsets;
And embrace the moon with open arms
And love you with no regrets.

I'd steal this sky above us
And run like the dreamers before me,
And Pack your bags with my lonely hands,
If you'd only be happy.
And I'd repay you for every star
From my eyes to your lips,
I'd path our way with moonlight
And crown you with this kiss.

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Old 03-01-2008, 07:23 AM   #2 (permalink)
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I like this. It says what it means with just the right amount of poetry. Good job.
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