ccr_2108

This is one of the first songs I wrote. I just looking for some feedback. I'll share some others a little later.

Over My Head

You said you always wanted to be over my head
But hearing that never changes
You said you always wanted to be over my head
But that’s not how things appear

From the first time, to the last time
Nothing has ever been fixed
You know things will work out
Cause we wont finish in last

You said you always wanted to be over my head
But hearing that never changes
You said you always wanted to be over my head
But that’s not how things appear

You ran off to your own ways
It hurt me just a little
I later moved on to a better place
You wont affect anymore

Cause you said you always wanted to be over my head
But hearing that never changes
You said you always wanted to be over my head
But that’s not how things appear

I moved on to much better things
I left you in the dust
You now want me back
But we all now the truth

Cause now I’m over your head
That’s how things will be
Cause now I’m over your head
That’s what its meant to be

Cause now I’m over your head
That’s how things will be
Cause now I’m over your head
That’s what its meant to be

TheCaster

doesnt the fray have a song like this?

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A soul in tension thats learning to fly
Condition grounded but determined to try
Cant keep my eyes from the circling skies
Tongue-tied and twisted just an earth-bound misfit

ccr_2108

Not just because it says "Over My Head" but I guess you can say its similar, but i didn't rip them off. I do listen to them a lot though. The chorus versus just came to me and I wanted to write something about it.