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Old 02-20-2008, 09:05 PM   #1 (permalink)
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This is one of the first songs I wrote. I just looking for some feedback. I'll share some others a little later.

Over My Head

You said you always wanted to be over my head
But hearing that never changes
You said you always wanted to be over my head
But thatís not how things appear

From the first time, to the last time
Nothing has ever been fixed
You know things will work out
Cause we wont finish in last

You said you always wanted to be over my head
But hearing that never changes
You said you always wanted to be over my head
But thatís not how things appear

You ran off to your own ways
It hurt me just a little
I later moved on to a better place
You wont affect anymore

Cause you said you always wanted to be over my head
But hearing that never changes
You said you always wanted to be over my head
But thatís not how things appear

I moved on to much better things
I left you in the dust
You now want me back
But we all now the truth

Cause now Iím over your head
Thatís how things will be
Cause now Iím over your head
Thatís what its meant to be

Cause now Iím over your head
Thatís how things will be
Cause now Iím over your head
Thatís what its meant to be
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Old 02-21-2008, 08:07 AM   #2 (permalink)
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doesnt the fray have a song like this?
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Old 02-21-2008, 01:52 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Not just because it says "Over My Head" but I guess you can say its similar, but i didn't rip them off. I do listen to them a lot though. The chorus versus just came to me and I wanted to write something about it.
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