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Old 03-03-2008, 05:50 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Old 03-04-2008, 07:52 PM   #2 (permalink)
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new version:

I know you dont understand
And I wonder even if I can
If you would only let me stay in hell

Its always been hard for me
When hanging out fails to please
And your love just feels so fu*king bland

You said you dont trust yourself
It doesn't matter what you felt
And now your gonna cut me before you bleed

CHORUS:
Love hurts
more than nerves
but the pain
soothes the burn
as I
think of her
as I
think of her

And now I dont understand
And I am no holy man
So what if I left you there in hell?

It was never hard for me
That was just your belief
You never saw me walk until I ran

You know I dont trust myself
And no I dont need your help
I just want to cut you before I bleed

CHORUS:
Love hurts
more than nerves
but the pain
soothes the burn
Love hurts
more than nerves
but the pain
soothes the burn
as i think of her
as i think of her
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Old 03-04-2008, 10:15 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I like it alot.

The chorus though is very similar to Love Hurts - Incubus. I guess its dependent on how its performed though.
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Old 03-04-2008, 11:27 PM   #4 (permalink)
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thanks! though i haven't listened to incubus much. you mean this line? (i just looked it up on google)

Love hurts
But sometimes it's a good hurt
And it feels like I'm alive
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Old 03-05-2008, 09:02 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Yea, that part of it. Same idea.

edit: i dont mean that in a bad way tho
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