please review
lyrics to an as-of-yet-untitled song.
with your tongue free of teeth you'll scream satellites and swallow a sun that never shines your eyes swelled to immeasurable size raining on us it feels like love like love like love any feedback is appreciated. |
What's the tune like?
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Good so far... keep writing this!
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So far it seems like perfect poetry... makes little to no sense and sounds very clever :)
good job. I would like to hear or read it when it is finished. |
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