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Old 05-07-2008, 08:45 AM   #1 (permalink)
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This is a song I wrote last year, a rough mix can be found here (click audio and select "when the river runs dry". This is the first track I completed that (I think) will be on my debut album... I am still re-recording sections of the song but this is a basic idea of what it will sound like.

Below are the lyrics.

When The River Runs Dry by Jason D'Amore

I know what I feel, can't deny
when the moment is real I won't set it aside
God must have chose you for a reason
It's easier to feel that it was just your time

when you're far from home, don't forget me
when every-thing's known, don't regret me
I love you so, now you know

The last moments we shared were not the same
you said I will carry on the family name
It isn't so easy to stay strong
when the river runs dry, it's time to move on

when you're far from home, don't forget me
when every thing's known, don't regret me
I love you so, now you know

Do you know, how you've touched my soul?
Do you know, you've shown me a life where I can be in control?
Do you know, you'll live in my heart and you'll live in my soul?
Do you know?

I gotta feeling that you know.... I gotta feeling that you know

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Old 05-22-2008, 12:40 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I really like the song. Or perhaps it's the avatar. Either way, I think it is very good. Your voice suits that colorful jacket nicely. I would absolutely listen to the song again although it is hard for me to be impartial when I am already biased.
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Old 05-22-2008, 01:31 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I really like the song. Or perhaps it's the avatar. Either way, I think it is very good. Your voice suits that colorful jacket nicely. I would absolutely listen to the song again although it is hard for me to be impartial when I am already biased.
well thank you for liking my song (and/or Avatar)... I have a feeling I know who this is
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Old 05-22-2008, 07:58 PM   #4 (permalink)
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More importantly, where are you having that feeling? HAHA! I kid! BTW, I just noticed that the colors in your pic match my broodwich avatar. LOL!!!
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Old 05-23-2008, 08:33 AM   #5 (permalink)
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sorta... actually not at all, are you ****ing blind?
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Old 05-23-2008, 08:53 AM   #6 (permalink)
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I'm not talking about your funky fuchsia background. I think your instrument and your outfit match pretty good even though they are a bit brighter than my broodwich. I believe you are the one who is ****ing blind. Must be a side effect from the herpes you contacted in the STD thread.
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I'm not talking about your funky fuchsia background. I think your instrument and your outfit match pretty good even though they are a bit brighter than my broodwich. I believe you are the one who is ****ing blind. Must be a side effect from the herpes you contacted in the STD thread.
no the blindness is a side effect of the chlamydia I received from that Hungarian transvestite actually... let's just agree to disagree on this one.
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Hungarian transvestite, eh?
Well that explains the fuchsia background.
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Hungarian transvestite, eh?
Well that explains the fuchsia background.
oh you know me so well.
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You're my hero. I think I'm gonna have toosit tattooed on my bosoms.
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