i like it!
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oh by the way, I thought it was awsome. That last post was just a tip.
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I think its beautiful. expand on it if you can, maybe a few different words here in there, but i enjoyed it alot!
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Strictly criticism:
Don't worry about rhyming every word or using every word when you sing it. You don't need to paint the whole picture, leave some mystery and something to the imagination. I have plenty positive to say, but that won't help you. Good Luck. |
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