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Old 06-08-2008, 08:51 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Default Ashes In Disguise - feedback please !

One of my new songs. good feedback is always good, but constructive criticism is what really helps, thank you

youtube.com/watch?v=SxlbHnucVoI&fmt=18

(C)I'm from the (F)country
(C)the end of the (F)line
(C)trucks run right (F)through here
like they're out of (G)time

a thousand years later
it ain't worth a dime
we run through this world
like we all want to die

(C)bottles run (F)empty
(C)tears all run (F)dry
(C)cigarrettes are (F)ashes in (G)diguise
(F)the last word is (G)always (C)goodbye

I've got this one friend
who lives in the park
he's crazy as money
he sleeps til it's dark

he's got a bad habit
of laughin and cryin'
do you think his tears
are worth less than mine ?

bottles run empty
tears all run dry
cigarettes are ashes in diguise
the last word is always goodbye

what are we chasing
what does it mean
the worlds spinning faster
than ever it seems

I'm from the country
the end of the line
people drive through here
like their out of time

bottles run empty
tears all run dry
we're all just ashes in disguise
the last word is always goodbye
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