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Old 06-19-2008, 04:44 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Nothing more to say really, just interested in what anyone has to say.

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The Miracle Man

I come to you with open arms
Magic tricks and lucky charms
I know weíre gonna get along
I donít ask for much youíll find
Just a moment of your time
And if you wanna quit thatís fine

I know secrets never told
Memories bought and sold
All that glitters may be gold
If you wanna talk itís free
But listening well that donít come cheap
Misery loves company

Take your time and think about it I sure do understand
And when youíre ready then you know where you can find me
Just ask for the miracle man

I donít discriminate or soothe
I alienate and suffer fools
Got to be kind to be cruel
Now your time is at an end
Run along and tell your friends
Iíll be back around again

If you jump just be careful where you land
You wonít see me but I might be right behind you
Thatís why Iím called the miracle man

Remember when we meet again I did not force your hand
What you ask for isnít always what you wanted
And that is why they call me the mother****ing miracle man

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If you want to hear it in context you can click the signature link if that helps. Look forward to some response. Any response lol.
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Old 06-19-2008, 05:14 AM   #2 (permalink)
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I like this punk country sound, cool. suggestion would be a brief pause after along.... them semi scream "just fine !" brief pause after that's fine.. "with me !"

gold... "you see ?!"
company "with me !"

you could continue this theme. just an idea. peace.
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Old 06-19-2008, 07:19 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Thanks, appreciate the poz feedback
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