My opinion then? Club Tropicanas lyrics are comparable with Shakespeare Soliloquies when sat next to your lyrics. High praise indeed.

Hey, I'm in your sig!

It's not been recorded

That's one positive about it.

But he's currently selling it to major labels... where the **** is the eyeroll emoticon?

But he didn't know that did he?
He just came storming at my lyrics like he was entering the ring at wrestle mania to fight against tugboat.
Imagine he was writing for MOJO.
"yeah, the song is **** and nothing like wrestling"
I take it all with a pinch of salt.

See in the slavery section people get irate but I don't mind people whoever they are. I go down Brixton and they say "alright Nathan, hows things.
I go up Camden they say "alright Nathan, hows it going"
I get along with people.
I go to Turkey and they bring me little cups of tea without milk and say "yes manchester united good" and I treat them with respect and then I tell them that in my country we sit on the toilet and they laugh and then I bid them farewell.
People are just people and you get all kinds.
No I don't mind Oojays point I just think he could be more eloquant especially as he said stop posting altogether while grind me down is a ****ing brilliant song.
It is about a drug dealer who works in the city by day to try to escape the nine to five and is beautiful with guitar.
But oojay probably prefers dukes of hazzard.

--But oojay probably prefers dukes of hazzard.--

Your very last line is basically bigotry and it makes a mockery of any arguments that you have in the 'Slavery' thread.

However I am digressing. The lyrics are nothing better than what is inside of a Christmas Card and Cliff Richard would'nt give you the time of the day with this track.

:laughing:

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cheers man.
It is about a drug dealer who works in the city by day and is trying to escape the 9-5 life so he can be free.
Most of my songs are about been free.
The rap song and the christmas song were just a joke off the top of my head but those other two are good songs man.
But words on paper mean little without sound.
There is breaks etc and stuff. It is like two way conversation echoing like a stoned daze.
The words mean little without the song as a whole I admit.
My rap song was just a joke. But don't rap songs that joke often come about?
I write comedy you see.

Chh...WHAT? STABS YOU WITH KNIVES.

yo, those lyrics are aight but it has no flow, may i suggest counting your syllables twice or maybe adding more compound words in. its all choppy.

a tip

if you cant recite it straight forward like you were reading a project

then its no good

wow..really dude?? should probably kill yourself...i like coke and i dont mean fizzy?! wtf is THAT! thats not music, thats the work of a true moron.

If you are serious about your lyrics, they need some work. Like maybe erasing the entire thing and starting over.

If youre not serious and just posting them for sh*ts and giggles then I digress to my original post.

And for someone who despises pro wrestling so much you seem to know heaps about it:rolleyes:

cheers man.
Peace to you too!

That's a hot track yo. Werd.

i didnt think it was that bad...needs some wobut its not as bad as everyones saying imo

Go DIE! =D

This track is still hot though.

To be quite honest, I think that you're trying to joke around.

If you're serious, I think that everything before "Dizzy" needs to be removed from the rap.

Start there. >.<

creepy dreams
 

Daytime is useless but I still dream
Night time wonder with my minds clever scheme.

For when I am sleeping the picture comes clear
The other side of the world
OR really quite near

I win it all in the end
and have things my way
sway baby sweetheart, easy now sway

Dawn breaks on a boring raining gray day
travel- work -eat but hey baby hey
Two more sleeps and maybe you know
Dreams change the world
They show us .......they show

For I can win in the end
My plan just takes time grow
I drift off again
I know girl I know:afro::drummer:

Urban RT and Jackhammer
This could be a love song or about west ham.
Kind of David Grayish innit?
!0th in the league with no money and a manager who speaks little English.
Jealousy must reek from you all.

Yeah...how I long for mid table mediocrity.

Shite poem btw.

you will get it sonny jim when your manager retires.
What then hey?
Get roy keeny keen?
You will get your longed for mediocrity when sir king alex the great tumbles off the mortal coil.
No amount of american teleshopping multi national coorporations will save you then.

What is this sudden rush of morons writing about nothing and rhyming their second grade vocab?

we can't all be as cool as you.
You are so cool you csn rise above it.
You try too hard that is your window.

I don't try at all.
It's a flow. A style.
I take advice off a tombstone.

http://farm1.static.flickr.com/91/23...55fb09d00f.jpg

fair play.
that is a top repost.
You should be a mod.

I'd appreciate it if you didn't keep trying to goad me in every post you make.

you probably inspired them with your relentless posting of terrible writing... its like you're completely oblivious to the fact you are a horrible writer

You're biased.

I am new here so I don't know anyone really. However, it seems that some members have issues with moderators...

I am hoping that all song lyrics are not mod vs member rants.

Adele, it seems you have some real talent. With that, you should have the maturity to understand that there will always be an opportunity for you to get the last word in... but you shouldn't simply write art as an instrument to prod folks.

You can always start your own forum and be king of your own castle.

People are subject to the same laws of physics that all matter is. If you apply force to move an object through space... there will always be resistance, friction and drag on that object unless you live in a vacuum.

I don't have issues with mods.
It's just harmless banter.
man some people are sooooo serious.
If you weren't you'd see fondness in my joking.
Man some people are just so serious.
My own forum. Thats an idea.
I'd call it nathan's forum about everything that nathan likes .co.uk or possibly .org
My own forum....thats got me thinking.

OK ADELE I'm not going to mess about with you any longer.
Start posting without any attempt to bait the moderators from now on and I'll take you seriously.
You've got a long history of mod baiting and since your recent return to these boards it seems as if every other post contains a reference to one of the mods.
Continue to include digs at the moderators within the contents of your future posts and we'll be forced to conclude, that the only reason you come here is to troll the boards at our expense.
Consequently, you will be banned.
I hope your mature enough to realise that this is your last chance.

You need to understand that the English language is very inefficient at conveying contextual inferences or contextual subtleties by simply reading the language.

Words, in the nude, are simply like traffic signs, stripped of contextual qualities for ease of understanding by the masses.

Stop signs mean "stop"; yield signs mean "yield"; merge signs mean "merge"

A stop sign doesn't say, on its reverse, "oh why are you stopping?...you're being soooo serious"

I hope you see that I am not coming down on you at all but trying instead to show you that it is quite difficult for a new person here to ascertain whether you are being serious or not...

It would be a shame to see you get banned since you also bring a quirky energy here and your posts have potential to be great. You're obviously intelligent and quite likely have a degree of education, either self or schooled, that is evidenced in your writing. Don't blow it for yourself and get booted..unless that is your ultimate goal. Forum trolling got very old around 2005 with advent of web 2.0 generation.

with regard to your points I am sorry if you feel I am antagonising you. I actually think I was been fondly humourous.
With regards to trolling.
I would consider myself rather an seo exert.
I have over 200 websites all ranking on page one on google search around the globe.
Initially I made a site about adele and used anchor text as adele for serps juice but any seo will tell you that links over 5 from the same site (even PR 5) is meaningless and I continued to post out of interest and not to gain links in fact my time should be spent gaining other links for my many websites as I want to make enough money to move to Ibiza on the hippie trail.
I am not trolling I assure you.

biased against shitty writing, yeah

Let's see you write something.

Will you two shut the fuck up arguing in every fucking thread in this fucking forum.

And this is being closed.