Chard's Songwriting Journal (lyrics, techno, dance, metal, Kiss)

chard · 02-19-2009, 04:06 AM

live a little gain a lot
go out and get what you havent got
wether you can buy, wether you cannot
dont say die,dont ever stop

believe in your self, live the dream
dont let them grind you down
if you can,leave! stop clowning around.

everything is possible nothing is denied
see what lifes like on the sunny side
if you can get their, with just a flip of the coin
then what you, staying for you stupid boy.

watch the tv, see other people fulfil there dreams
eat your potatoe chips drinking your gasoline
turn into a slob believing your not bothered
i know your secret its all uncovered.

dont be like your friends ignorant and unashamed
you cant really want to be just the same
when the ladder, falls at your feet climb it to the top
be a breathe of fresh air, lead them by example, dont stop.

Frozen Angel · 02-19-2009, 05:20 AM

you;ve inspired me to join the circus...I thank you so much.

It's good.

darkcornerinthecloset · 02-20-2009, 04:50 PM

wooow ur happy and inspiring today! thats new and interesting!

Schizotypic · 02-21-2009, 10:39 AM

I really like it. I mean, the point of it, the tone, the mood. I relate, that is how I like to think. It seems more written like lyrics then a poem though.

BillyShears · 01-20-2010, 02:24 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by chard

live a little gain a lot
go out and get what you havent got
wether you can buy, wether you cannot
dont say die,dont ever stop

believe in your self, live the dream
dont let them grind you down
if you can,leave! stop clowning around.

everything is possible nothing is denied
see what lifes like on the sunny side
if you can get their, with just a flip of the coin
then what you, staying for you stupid boy.

watch the tv, see other people fulfil there dreams
eat your potatoe chips drinking your gasoline
turn into a slob believing your not bothered
i know your secret its all uncovered.

dont be like your friends ignorant and unashamed
you cant really want to be just the same
when the ladder, falls at your feet climb it to the top
be a breathe of fresh air, lead them by example, dont stop.

That ones pretty decent, and the first one is okay, although the dance floor concept has been used before.

02-19-2009, 04:06 AM	#1 (permalink)
chard Music Addict Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: england Posts: 390	pastures of good sense live a little gain a lot go out and get what you havent got wether you can buy, wether you cannot dont say die,dont ever stop believe in your self, live the dream dont let them grind you down if you can,leave! stop clowning around. everything is possible nothing is denied see what lifes like on the sunny side if you can get their, with just a flip of the coin then what you, staying for you stupid boy. watch the tv, see other people fulfil there dreams eat your potatoe chips drinking your gasoline turn into a slob believing your not bothered i know your secret its all uncovered. dont be like your friends ignorant and unashamed you cant really want to be just the same when the ladder, falls at your feet climb it to the top be a breathe of fresh air, lead them by example, dont stop.

02-19-2009, 05:20 AM	#2 (permalink)
Frozen Angel Groupie Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Canada Posts: 41	you;ve inspired me to join the circus...I thank you so much. It's good.

02-20-2009, 04:50 PM	#3 (permalink)
darkcornerinthecloset Music Addict Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Rochester, NY Posts: 160	wooow ur happy and inspiring today! thats new and interesting!

02-21-2009, 10:39 AM	#4 (permalink)
Schizotypic Souls of Sound Sailors Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Mojave Posts: 759	I really like it. I mean, the point of it, the tone, the mood. I relate, that is how I like to think. It seems more written like lyrics then a poem though.