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FireInCairo 11-23-2008 06:33 PM

Thank you very much. I'll try and post some more up soonish

guitargirl_93 11-23-2008 11:08 PM

Rad tunes on the myspace!

FireInCairo 11-24-2008 12:14 AM

It's so blunt.

I’m not sure
What year it is now
Please tell me, I don’t see why not
Be still and stretch your legs
It will help
Ease your pain
Never leave me
Because I don’t think I could be.

On Thursday night,
I was squeamish
At the thought of another stretch
In the morgue
It’s such a chore
I’m bleeding
And I want to turn this around,
A scalpel drops crashing sound.

The smell
Of the ointment
Rises into atmosphere
You know its really all about
Atmosphere
In the evening
You’ll never know what you want
Its so, its so blunt.

You say you love this stuff
And You can never get enough
I know you’re a liar

millerman 11-24-2008 01:26 PM

Good job mate, your style's not really my thing, but I certainly like the lyrics. In fact I took the 'I Adore You' lyrics before hearing your version and came up with a verse and chorus on acoustic in seconds.

Very different to yours mind; verse is finger picked then into a slowish strum of A and C with the chorus sung slowly over the top. I've tuned down a whole step/tone on all strings too to get a more bassy sound.

millerman 11-24-2008 01:46 PM

Beg your pardon, A has become G and C becomes Bb.

FireInCairo 12-10-2008 04:46 PM

This is a little piano ballad I just wrote because I feel freakin' awful due to conjunctivitis and the flu. I could barely sing and I sound really weird on the recording.

I'm not well,
Ripped, Bloodied eye.
I'm not well,
I beg you, please try.

I'm getting better
I'm beginning to feel alright
I'm getting better
May we never Fall apart

Sickness, looming bitter
My body fails again
Sickness, looming bitter
I hope I am on the mend.

FireInCairo 01-05-2009 05:13 AM

This was partly inspired by my girlfriend gushing about how sexy the guy from the teenagers is and me being an obsessive jealous-type. Oh, and he has no talent and a stupid mustache.


She's enamored with a rotten teenager
uh woah
He's got a leather jacket and hates her
uh woah

She wants to go
She wants to go
Gotta let her know
Gotta make it show x2

She's excited by a cheap pretender
uh woah
He's all smiles, could never contend her
uh woah

She wants a ****ing old waster
uh woah
I wish I was a, I wish was a
uh woah

WWWP 01-05-2009 01:17 PM

I really like Two Lovers and Lace.

samsu 01-06-2009 01:18 AM

Thanks for the lyrics :)

Double X 01-06-2009 07:52 AM

I listened to the songs on last Fm., the dubbing of the vocals kinda put me off but I liked the actual music.


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