Old Lyrics - Critique Please
 

My words ran away, a minute ago
Slow motion drama, just for show
You say that I'm wrong
To switch off and on
This conversation turns things upside down

I couldn't choose, just what to know
If i lit the wick, if this would explode
You say that I'm wrong
To shout this down the phone
This conversation turns things upside down

I personally have always had a problem with saying "phone" in my lyrics.

Maybe it's the fact that it modernizes the music too much?

I don't know.

I agree... just me though.

=P It's not just you.

It's me, too.

And hey, are you following me? =P

*shady eyes*... No.