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Old 11-18-2008, 09:18 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Default Old Lyrics - Critique Please

My words ran away, a minute ago
Slow motion drama, just for show
You say that I'm wrong
To switch off and on
This conversation turns things upside down

I couldn't choose, just what to know
If i lit the wick, if this would explode
You say that I'm wrong
To shout this down the phone
This conversation turns things upside down
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Old 11-20-2008, 09:35 AM   #2 (permalink)
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I personally have always had a problem with saying "phone" in my lyrics.

Maybe it's the fact that it modernizes the music too much?

I don't know.
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Old 11-20-2008, 09:18 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I agree... just me though.
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Old 11-20-2008, 09:23 PM   #4 (permalink)
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=P It's not just you.

It's me, too.

And hey, are you following me? =P
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Old 11-20-2008, 09:25 PM   #5 (permalink)
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*shady eyes*... No.
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