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thomasbreaker 11-25-2008 07:34 PM

I guess this song is about animals..??

anticipation 11-25-2008 08:15 PM

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Originally Posted by Double X (Post 552035)
Yeah it's really metaphor to how penguins interact with sea lions...

violently, i assume.

millerman 11-26-2008 07:10 AM

Yep, deffo enough rubbish in the thread so far to write a few lyrics :P

Double X 11-26-2008 10:37 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by anticipation (Post 552094)
violently, i assume.

uh...sure...:D

someonecompletelyrandom 11-26-2008 10:40 AM

Dynamics= Loud - Soft
Perspective= The Turtles half penguin lover.

SwayBreezy 11-26-2008 10:41 AM

I'll give the opening line a shot....

As the sun shown down on the great green plain.

DearJenny 11-26-2008 10:43 AM

My favorite lyrics I wrote is:

"The cigarette burned away minutes of it's life,
And years of mine."

If someone is serious about a collective songwriting thing, we can use that.

guitargirl_93 11-26-2008 11:06 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by CityLightsLikeRain (Post 552325)
My favorite lyrics I wrote is:

"The cigarette burned away minutes of it's life,
And years of mine."

If someone is serious about a collective songwriting thing, we can use that.

That's f*cking rad!

someonecompletelyrandom 11-26-2008 02:31 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by SwayBreezy (Post 552323)
I'll give the opening line a shot....

As the sun shown down on the great green plain.

Eh, not a good opener.. try again?

Double X 11-26-2008 02:51 PM

Is it first person perspective or third person?


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