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guitargirl_93 11-26-2008 03:10 PM


Originally Posted by Double X (Post 552535)
Is it first person perspective or third person?

Haha, exactly what I was asking. It's kinda hard to write when you don't know these things!

someonecompletelyrandom 11-26-2008 04:17 PM


Originally Posted by Sonace (Post 552322)
Perspective= The Turtles half penguin lover.


guitargirl_93 11-26-2008 04:56 PM


Originally Posted by Sonace (Post 552581)

I thought we were writing about a tortoise that raced a hare but the hair didn't take breaks, so he won, but then got drunk and passed out at an after-party and the tortoise suffocated him with a pillow. ;)

someonecompletelyrandom 11-26-2008 11:56 PM

Actually I think it's the turtle who wins..

FaSho 11-27-2008 07:57 AM

Not in this version.

josh.averes 01-04-2009 06:18 PM

first post BTW love the site, will be coming back,

As Usain lined up Hawking for a hundred meter dash,
The turtle was already eying up the winners sash
The turtle dreamed the prize was his, his eyes transfixed on gold
Jamaicas heart was racing, the race already his.

He presumed

stevesonthebay 01-12-2009 06:43 AM

ok i get it. i got the opening line.
i met a turtle in a bar one fiday night.

someonecompletelyrandom 01-13-2009 11:45 PM

Don't know his name. Got No reply.

(Okay so Sylable format is 12 then 8 for verses)

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