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Rubber 12-09-2008 07:47 PM

Rubber's Songwriting Journal
 
Most of these are poems not songs, with a couple of exceptions.

Rubber 01-07-2009 04:48 PM

lyrics that I'll never use
 
my straw
was broken
by a camel's back

your jaw
hit the floor
and it stayed so slack

if it's broken then it's broken
and I think i'll take this token
of the words that went unspoken
and exchange it for the moments
that i'll never get to have with you

no I'm not
laughing at you

there's nothing
else left to do

these thoughts crept into my mind
(I just can't shake them)
sometimes I dream that you lied
(I just can't take them)
but I wake at every sunrise
(I just can't shake them)

and it's the same

Janszoon 01-07-2009 05:03 PM

A line I came up with once that I've always wanted to fit into a song but have never been able to is:

She was an old and floppy-breasted whore.

Rubber 01-07-2009 05:26 PM

haha here let me help you out with that.

Rubber 01-07-2009 05:28 PM

looks like i'll have to squeeze a syllable in though

Janszoon 01-07-2009 05:51 PM

Heh. Nice.

Rubber 01-07-2009 07:00 PM

I need captain caveman to come tell me if this sucks or not.

CAPTAIN CAVEMAN 01-07-2009 07:34 PM

get off my back

it does suck though

Janszoon 01-07-2009 07:37 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by CAPTAIN CAVEMAN (Post 575289)
get off my back

it does suck though

Except my contribution of course.

Rubber 01-07-2009 08:01 PM

alright. but I think my band might actually use these now, and i'll finally succeed in turning us into a posi-core band. because there aren't enough of those already.


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