Thoughts? - First ever attempt... (lyrics, song)

jono95 · 01-25-2009, 02:44 PM

this is my first ever attempt at writing a song. It might be rubbish so please be honest...

Tell me that you love me
Just please tell me that you love me
I love you
So just love me back
How hard can it be?

I must have known you for about two years now
And ever since I've known
That you're the one I want, I need and I must
Be with forever

Tell me that you love me
Just please tell me that you love me
I love you
So just love me back
How hard can it be?

Maybe you don't like me
But what are the chances of that?
Even so, I wont be able to take it
so do it for my sake

Tell me that you love me
Just please tell me that you love me
I love you
So just love me back
How hard can it be?

Boy you are just too irresistible
Anyone with a heart would want a piece of you
But boy please choose me to cut the cake!

Tell me that you love me
Just please tell me that you love me
I love you
So just love me back
How hard can it be?

Tell me that you love me
Just please tell me that you love me
I love you
So just love me back
How hard can it be?

Do you love me?

I wrote it in 5 minutes. Comments?

Ziah · 01-25-2009, 03:55 PM

Nice work for 5 minutes. Do you have a melody for it yet?

buttons · 01-25-2009, 04:57 PM

Its not too bad to be fair, is the song influenced by someone in your life haha?

sleepy jack · 01-26-2009, 12:48 PM

http://www.musicbanter.com/song-writ...nevermore.html

01-25-2009, 02:44 PM	#1 (permalink)
jono95 Groupie Join Date: Jan 2009 Posts: 1	Thoughts? - First ever attempt... this is my first ever attempt at writing a song. It might be rubbish so please be honest... Tell me that you love me Just please tell me that you love me I love you So just love me back How hard can it be? I must have known you for about two years now And ever since I've known That you're the one I want, I need and I must Be with forever Tell me that you love me Just please tell me that you love me I love you So just love me back How hard can it be? Maybe you don't like me But what are the chances of that? Even so, I wont be able to take it so do it for my sake Tell me that you love me Just please tell me that you love me I love you So just love me back How hard can it be? Boy you are just too irresistible Anyone with a heart would want a piece of you But boy please choose me to cut the cake! Tell me that you love me Just please tell me that you love me I love you So just love me back How hard can it be? Tell me that you love me Just please tell me that you love me I love you So just love me back How hard can it be? Do you love me? I wrote it in 5 minutes. Comments?

01-25-2009, 03:55 PM	#2 (permalink)
Ziah Groupie Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: christchurch Posts: 12	Nice work for 5 minutes. Do you have a melody for it yet?

01-25-2009, 04:57 PM	#3 (permalink)
buttons Groupie Join Date: Jan 2009 Posts: 9	Its not too bad to be fair, is the song influenced by someone in your life haha?