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Raust 01-29-2009 04:01 PM

B.i.p.o.l.a.r
 
I wrote a song for my band. Here are the lyrics. Feel free to criticize. Take note that this is a short song. I intended this to be quick and to the point.

B.I.P.O.L.A.R


b-i-p-o-l-a-r
that is what i think you are
bipolar
bipolar
bipolar

looking at you today
makes me just want to say

b-i-p-o-l-a-r
that is what i think you are
bipolar
bipolar
bipolar

ruining peoples lives
here you go choke on knives

b-i-p-o-l-a-r
that is what i think you ar
bipolar
bipolar
bipolar

PerfectRandomness 01-29-2009 06:19 PM

yeah pretty short... the verses are pretty meaningless and calling someone bipolar? just weird. do you know what that is?

Wifey Boozer 02-01-2009 06:01 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by raust
...and to the point.


...What point?

Double X 02-01-2009 06:36 PM

It's straightforward, obviously not thought-provoking but not bad as long the instrumental side fits.

kthedrummer 02-01-2009 06:55 PM

I am bi-polar and I can't run my own life. Ow..it says ruin...I bet this is about someone you know and hate who is bi-polar.

Gazz_Evans 02-02-2009 02:19 PM

sounds like your just making fun of people with mental problems, kinda harsh perhaps?

Lutherfish 02-05-2009 07:10 PM

I think that the song is supposed to be for a Screamo/Hardcore/Metal song.
Which, if that were the case, I would say it meets the criteria.
If not, then it kind of seems a little peculiar to be unnecessarily insulting.

Frozen Angel 02-06-2009 02:19 AM

uhm...this doesn't really have much of a point at all... But I wish that I was a manic depressant, I'd get lots of **** done. Now that would be an awesome disease, I'd have super powers and not have to sleep. Ok so that was the thought provoke that it gave me....dum di dum...oh look a squirrel...I have sqirrels in my back yard. There is no point to what I am typing right now...so...yeah....time to go read something else.

Janszoon 02-06-2009 03:53 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Double X (Post 589011)
It's straightforward, obviously not thought-provoking but not bad as long the instrumental side fits.

I imagined Devo-ish electronic music while I was reading those lyrics. I think it would actually work pretty well in that context.

Roemilca 02-06-2009 02:03 PM

The first thing that popped into my head while I read those lyrics was MSI.


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