B.i.p.o.l.a.r
I wrote a song for my band. Here are the lyrics. Feel free to criticize. Take note that this is a short song. I intended this to be quick and to the point.
B.I.P.O.L.A.R b-i-p-o-l-a-r that is what i think you are bipolar bipolar bipolar looking at you today makes me just want to say b-i-p-o-l-a-r that is what i think you are bipolar bipolar bipolar ruining peoples lives here you go choke on knives b-i-p-o-l-a-r that is what i think you ar bipolar bipolar bipolar |
yeah pretty short... the verses are pretty meaningless and calling someone bipolar? just weird. do you know what that is?
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It's straightforward, obviously not thought-provoking but not bad as long the instrumental side fits.
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I am bi-polar and I can't run my own life. Ow..it says ruin...I bet this is about someone you know and hate who is bi-polar.
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sounds like your just making fun of people with mental problems, kinda harsh perhaps?
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I think that the song is supposed to be for a Screamo/Hardcore/Metal song.
Which, if that were the case, I would say it meets the criteria. If not, then it kind of seems a little peculiar to be unnecessarily insulting. |
uhm...this doesn't really have much of a point at all... But I wish that I was a manic depressant, I'd get lots of **** done. Now that would be an awesome disease, I'd have super powers and not have to sleep. Ok so that was the thought provoke that it gave me....dum di dum...oh look a squirrel...I have sqirrels in my back yard. There is no point to what I am typing right now...so...yeah....time to go read something else.
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The first thing that popped into my head while I read those lyrics was MSI.
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