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Old 01-29-2009, 04:01 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Default B.i.p.o.l.a.r

I wrote a song for my band. Here are the lyrics. Feel free to criticize. Take note that this is a short song. I intended this to be quick and to the point.

B.I.P.O.L.A.R


b-i-p-o-l-a-r
that is what i think you are
bipolar
bipolar
bipolar

looking at you today
makes me just want to say

b-i-p-o-l-a-r
that is what i think you are
bipolar
bipolar
bipolar

ruining peoples lives
here you go choke on knives

b-i-p-o-l-a-r
that is what i think you ar
bipolar
bipolar
bipolar

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Old 01-29-2009, 06:19 PM   #2 (permalink)
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yeah pretty short... the verses are pretty meaningless and calling someone bipolar? just weird. do you know what that is?
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Old 02-01-2009, 06:01 PM   #3 (permalink)
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...and to the point.

...What point?
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Old 02-01-2009, 06:36 PM   #4 (permalink)
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It's straightforward, obviously not thought-provoking but not bad as long the instrumental side fits.
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Old 02-01-2009, 06:55 PM   #5 (permalink)
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I am bi-polar and I can't run my own life. Ow..it says ruin...I bet this is about someone you know and hate who is bi-polar.
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Old 02-02-2009, 02:19 PM   #6 (permalink)
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sounds like your just making fun of people with mental problems, kinda harsh perhaps?
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Old 02-05-2009, 07:10 PM   #7 (permalink)
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I think that the song is supposed to be for a Screamo/Hardcore/Metal song.
Which, if that were the case, I would say it meets the criteria.
If not, then it kind of seems a little peculiar to be unnecessarily insulting.
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Old 02-06-2009, 02:19 AM   #8 (permalink)
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uhm...this doesn't really have much of a point at all... But I wish that I was a manic depressant, I'd get lots of **** done. Now that would be an awesome disease, I'd have super powers and not have to sleep. Ok so that was the thought provoke that it gave me....dum di dum...oh look a squirrel...I have sqirrels in my back yard. There is no point to what I am typing right now...so...yeah....time to go read something else.
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Old 02-06-2009, 03:53 AM   #9 (permalink)
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It's straightforward, obviously not thought-provoking but not bad as long the instrumental side fits.
I imagined Devo-ish electronic music while I was reading those lyrics. I think it would actually work pretty well in that context.
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Old 02-06-2009, 02:03 PM   #10 (permalink)
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The first thing that popped into my head while I read those lyrics was MSI.
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