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Old 01-29-2009, 09:24 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Default poem i wrote,what u think?

seasons change.As the weather changes from hot to cold.leaves fall from trees.The further apart we are,feels like we are drifting away from each other.thats the last thing i want to happen.tears fall from my cheek.my heart beats faster and faster.counting the days till your in my arms again.i lay awake at night.thoughts of you roll in the back of my mind.hoping the feelings that you have for me never change.
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Old 01-29-2009, 10:22 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I think that's more of a paragraph than a poem.
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