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02-05-2009, 12:07 AM
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Ad Astra
Join Date: Jul 2006
Posts: 730
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Ad Astra (Revised)
Alright, so a while back I wrote something on here titled "Ad Astra".
I've been toying with the idea of doing an alternate version for a while now, because I'm not sure if I picked the right feel for the lyrics the first time. Let me know what you think of this version. I may replace the word "shamed" later and add some more to it. This is pretty much the core of the lyrics, though. Ad Astra (Revised) 02/04/09 - 02/05/09 [-----Verse 1-----] My body's broken, my soul is shamed I'm barely breathing and I feel Pushed away From your love and from your grace I need your light to guide me Into place [-----End Verse-----] [-----Chorus-----] I cannot go on Without you anymore But why can't I let go If I'm so afraid to hold you close? I need your light to guide me Into your open arms I need your light to guide me To the stars [-----End Chorus-----] [-----Verse 2-----] My spirit's fading, my mind is numb I'm barely living and I feel So alone I need your light to give me hope I've been so lost since you Left the world [-----End Verse-----] [-----Chorus-----] I cannot go on Without you anymore But why can't I let go If I'm so afraid to hold you close? I need your light to guide me Into your open arms I need your light to guide me To the stars (x2) [-----End Chorus-----]
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