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Old 02-20-2009, 05:49 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Default I Wanna See Your Face

I wanna see your face
I'm being serious when I say this:
those bangs
do not look good on you.
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Old 02-20-2009, 05:58 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Lol
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Old 02-20-2009, 06:16 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Why can't they all be this poignant????
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Old 02-20-2009, 06:21 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Why can't they all be this poignant????
I know, right? It really takes a special kind of poet though.
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Old 02-20-2009, 07:50 PM   #5 (permalink)
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i like the first stanza

although it's a little wordy.
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