I Wanna See Your Face (quote)

**Janszoon** · 02-20-2009, 05:49 PM

I wanna see your face
I'm being serious when I say this:
those bangs
do not look good on you.

WWWP · 02-20-2009, 05:58 PM

Lol

NSW · 02-20-2009, 06:16 PM

Why can't they all be this poignant????

**Janszoon** · 02-20-2009, 06:21 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by nonsubmissivewife

Why can't they all be this poignant????

I know, right? It really takes a special kind of poet though.

lucifer_sam · 02-20-2009, 07:50 PM

i like the first stanza

although it's a little wordy.

02-20-2009, 05:49 PM	#1 (permalink)
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02-20-2009, 06:16 PM	#3 (permalink)
NSW Bigger and Better Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Texas girl living in the UK Posts: 2,596	Why can't they all be this poignant???? __________________ Hi.

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lucifer_sam Unrepentant Ass-Mod Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Pennsylvania Posts: 3,921	i like the first stanza although it's a little wordy. __________________ first.am