I tried doing what darkcornerinthecloset does... (speaker, quote, talent, Organ)

Schizotypic · 03-10-2009, 05:47 PM

And made a poem in twenty-five seconds. Here it is:

Today, tomorrow and everyday
I feel like motherfukking god
Blasting speaker
melting brain
Spoil children
spare the rod
Start ignition
hit the gas
Covor sh!t with kerosin
Light a lighter
Snort a line
Getting higher?
Eat this tab!
Faster
faster
Hit a bar
Hit a car
Hear the beat?
Chew this
Swallow that
Where the fukk are all the pills?
fukk him up
fukk them up
fukk fukk fukk
What'd we hit?
I'm out of my my mind
To get out of my skin
But you know,
Feels so good to die

WWWP · 03-10-2009, 05:49 PM

If you're going to imitate someone why don't you pick someone with talent?

Schizotypic · 03-10-2009, 05:50 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by wolverinewolfweiselpigeon

If you're going to imitate someone why don't you pick someone with talent?

Because I felt like writing something that didn't take forever.

darkcornerinthecloset · 03-10-2009, 06:28 PM

interesting. why do you hate me?

Schizotypic · 03-10-2009, 07:17 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by darkcornerinthecloset

interesting. why do you hate me?

I don't hate you. I don't even dislike, I was just joking around.

Freebase Dali · 03-10-2009, 08:30 PM

Lmbo!

Schizotypic · 03-11-2009, 10:44 PM

Man, I was just trying to try my hand at writing a poem under a minute, I think it came out good considering the time restriction! At least it has a concept to it...

7gaugejames · 03-12-2009, 12:38 PM

Be nice, thick skins on, grain of salt at the ready,yes? ok 60 sec's ..go.

pressure

Flailing around i sieze the moment to yell,stop.
I make the noises in my head yell stop also,
they never listen.
feeling desserted and highly alone,
I wonder how much pressure I can take.
Blinding, boiling, trouble toiling,
the pressure starts to mount,
finding the valve and running right past it
i explode.

Shoot almost two minutes, wow thats hard.

Shoe · 03-12-2009, 06:33 PM

Thirty seconds... yall ready? I've got it mastered.
Three, two, one, go!

I'm talking to this chick on the telephone
She doesnt understand me
No one does
Its really sad
Im crying
Grrr Im mad
Apathy is closing in around me
Im falling
Like really ****ing fast.
Grrr
Please stab my internal organs with your love

OWNED!!!

Freebase Dali · 03-12-2009, 07:20 PM

I got one better:

Start the stop watch:

KERPLUNK.

03-10-2009, 05:47 PM	#1 (permalink)
Schizotypic Souls of Sound Sailors Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Mojave Posts: 759	I tried doing what darkcornerinthecloset does... And made a poem in twenty-five seconds. Here it is: Today, tomorrow and everyday I feel like motherfukking god Blasting speaker melting brain Spoil children spare the rod Start ignition hit the gas Covor sh!t with kerosin Light a lighter Snort a line Getting higher? Eat this tab! Faster faster Hit a bar Hit a car Hear the beat? Chew this Swallow that Where the fukk are all the pills? fukk him up fukk them up fukk fukk fukk What'd we hit? I'm out of my my mind To get out of my skin But you know, Feels so good to die

03-12-2009, 12:38 PM	#8 (permalink)
7gaugejames Music Addict Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Imperial Beach Ca. Posts: 101	No one hates you ; as follows Be nice, thick skins on, grain of salt at the ready,yes? ok 60 sec's ..go. pressure Flailing around i sieze the moment to yell,stop. I make the noises in my head yell stop also, they never listen. feeling desserted and highly alone, I wonder how much pressure I can take. Blinding, boiling, trouble toiling, the pressure starts to mount, finding the valve and running right past it i explode. Shoot almost two minutes, wow thats hard. __________________ I don't care who you are, Gunslinger, shmunslinger, everyone needs a good purse. Last edited by 7gaugejames; 03-12-2009 at 12:44 PM.

03-10-2009, 06:28 PM	#4 (permalink)
darkcornerinthecloset Music Addict Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Rochester, NY Posts: 160	interesting. why do you hate me?

03-10-2009, 08:30 PM	#6 (permalink)
Freebase Dali Partying on the inside Join Date: Mar 2009 Posts: 5,584	Lmbo!

03-11-2009, 10:44 PM	#7 (permalink)
Schizotypic Souls of Sound Sailors Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Mojave Posts: 759	Man, I was just trying to try my hand at writing a poem under a minute, I think it came out good considering the time restriction! At least it has a concept to it...

03-12-2009, 07:20 PM	#10 (permalink)
Freebase Dali Partying on the inside Join Date: Mar 2009 Posts: 5,584	I got one better: Start the stop watch: KERPLUNK.