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Old 03-10-2009, 05:47 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Default I tried doing what darkcornerinthecloset does...

And made a poem in twenty-five seconds. Here it is:
Today, tomorrow and everyday
I feel like motherfukking god
Blasting speaker
melting brain
Spoil children
spare the rod
Start ignition
hit the gas
Covor sh!t with kerosin
Light a lighter
Snort a line
Getting higher?
Eat this tab!
Faster
faster
Hit a bar
Hit a car
Hear the beat?
Chew this
Swallow that
Where the fukk are all the pills?
fukk him up
fukk them up
fukk fukk fukk
What'd we hit?
I'm out of my my mind
To get out of my skin
But you know,
Feels so good to die
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Old 03-10-2009, 05:49 PM   #2 (permalink)
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If you're going to imitate someone why don't you pick someone with talent?
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Old 03-10-2009, 05:50 PM   #3 (permalink)
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If you're going to imitate someone why don't you pick someone with talent?
Because I felt like writing something that didn't take forever.
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Old 03-10-2009, 06:28 PM   #4 (permalink)
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interesting. why do you hate me?
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Old 03-10-2009, 07:17 PM   #5 (permalink)
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interesting. why do you hate me?
I don't hate you. I don't even dislike, I was just joking around.
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Old 03-10-2009, 08:30 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Lmbo!
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Old 03-11-2009, 10:44 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Man, I was just trying to try my hand at writing a poem under a minute, I think it came out good considering the time restriction! At least it has a concept to it...
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Old 03-12-2009, 12:38 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Be nice, thick skins on, grain of salt at the ready,yes? ok 60 sec's ..go.

pressure

Flailing around i sieze the moment to yell,stop.
I make the noises in my head yell stop also,
they never listen.
feeling desserted and highly alone,
I wonder how much pressure I can take.
Blinding, boiling, trouble toiling,
the pressure starts to mount,
finding the valve and running right past it
i explode.


Shoot almost two minutes, wow thats hard.
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Old 03-12-2009, 06:33 PM   #9 (permalink)
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Thirty seconds... yall ready? I've got it mastered.
Three, two, one, go!

I'm talking to this chick on the telephone
She doesnt understand me
No one does
Its really sad
Im crying
Grrr Im mad
Apathy is closing in around me
Im falling
Like really ****ing fast.
Grrr
Please stab my internal organs with your love


OWNED!!!
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Old 03-12-2009, 07:20 PM   #10 (permalink)
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I got one better:


Start the stop watch:








KERPLUNK.
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