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Old 03-10-2009, 06:30 PM   #1 (permalink)
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so there's this girl, she's amazing
she's everything i've wanted
this might sound a bit cliche
but she's got not even one flaw and
it's true, it's true
so there's this girl, she's really nice
they say everything's got a price
well she can have my heart
i think she had it from the start and
it's true, it's true
she amazes me, she gracefully
makes her way to me
she makes beauty seem so easy
how does she do it
yeah she amazes me, she gracefully
makes her way to me
she makes me sound so contradictory
and maybe, just maybe...
so there's this girl, she's a sight
if i'm lucky i just might
be with her this saturday night
she lights up the evening sky
and she might be pretending, but she makes it
seem so easy
how does she do it.
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Old 03-10-2009, 07:19 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Sounds a bit cliche to me, at least it rhymes.
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Old 03-11-2009, 02:35 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I intended for it to be cliche.
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so there's this girl, she's amazing
she's everything i've wanted
this might sound a bit cliche
but she's got not even one flaunt and
it's true, it's true
so there's this girl, she's really nice
they say everything's got a price
well she can have my heart
i think she had it from the start and
it's true, it's true
she amazes me, she gracefully
makes her way to me
she makes beauty seem so easy
how does she do it
yeah she amazes me, she gracefully
makes her way to me
she makes me sound so contradictory
and maybe, just maybe...
so there's this girl, she's a sight
if i'm lucky i just might
be with her this saturday night
she lights up the evening sky
and she might be pretending, but she makes it
seem so easy
how does she do it.
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Old 03-11-2009, 06:43 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Oh, my bad.
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Old 03-11-2009, 06:50 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Next time I intend something to be a cliche', I'll just refer to whatever's playing on the radio at the time...
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